Open Poetry #40 |
Today |
lgina Member
since 2004-07-20
Posts 52 |
Tomorrow always seems so far away. Time just rumbles around and never does it stop. Light becomes dark then light agian. Wake up Go to work Come home Go to bed. The day has become yesterday. Tomorrow always seems so far away. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, this is how some days seem to stretch out |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
It is nice that one finds time to come out of the day-night cycle to post a poem here. enjoyed. out again soon. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes a person ask "is this all there is to life?" I know what you mean here...good write |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. yesterday is even farther John . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's because you have expectations for tomorrow ... when we savour the moment and make the best of it, we less often feel that we are missing something. You expressed your thoughts well. Love, Margherita |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this really described the emotion of time passing slowly and without any joy. You did a wonderful job with this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Gina! Time is such a trickster... when you're having a great time...it comes and goes so fast, when you're bored...oh, how it plods along but when your sad and you wish for it to skip the day altogether, it turns around and makes you remember all the other sad days of your life. It doesn't seem fair! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello, again, Again, Igina... welcome home! |
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