Open Poetry #40 |
Rhyme and Reason.... |
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Though to some it seems -- hodge-podgic, All the roots are ground -- in logic. The games-riddles-reason is revealed, In a place where a child defines the real. And Oh! Dichotomous friend -- What Bliss! To unearth the answers buried -- In this. Red and White Queens plus the Duchess Hare and Hatter with Stopped Watches Cheshire Cat is here and gone While Mock Turtle sings his song Live chess pieces, pack of cards Hurried Rabbit, Queen of Hearts Tweedledee and Tweedledum What's the meaning of the sum? In this Wonderland it seems That all the world is based on dreams... ...but do not worry, for we see That one plus two still equals three, And that we can't have less than none. So I ask of everyone~ More Tea? . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling~~ wanted to tell you that I enjoyed your family magician pictures... M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ 'Tis the season for rhyme and reason and I can see that you have found the ink to make us think while we are laughing TOO ~~ Love ya' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful Nancy will we have jam with our tea or was that yesterday? I love it |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OMG this is awesome! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Loving the play of words, yet the meaning of unexplainable magic! And this very poem comes at the most wonderful of times {i.e., I needed it most!] so please, do, write on! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
fun! to write. how cheeful! enjoyed. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just fantastic. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very clever poem, Nancy Lee....different form for you....it's good, too! Liked it a bunch....and yes, I'll have some tea, please. *smiles*...jo |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
This was wonderful! The rhyming and flow were terrific and it was so cute and lighthearted. I really liked this one a lot! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker inspired writing. And I'd love to have tea with you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
It is true your poetry is enchanting. I loved it. Makes me realize that I must, must make time to feed and nourish from the greats. SG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you so much everyone! Your thoughts on this one are very much appreciated. ~Hugs & Happy Easter, Nancy~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, we can sit and think or we can play and dream ... and beam, like you do, dear enchanted Nancy. Very beautifully done! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Lots of fun Nancy - I enjoyed it very much - Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, you truly are an Enchanting Poetess! Both you and your quill are spell-binding and magical! A charming, whimsical ~ and quizzical ~ write! So good to see you posting again! Warm loving hug 'n a smile, Linda |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*giggling with delight*...please pour me another one....Absolutely delightful....I love it...**Big Hugs** |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
~Your words of wit and lovely grace Have placed a smile upon my face! Oh, to only be a child again, And lose myself in Wonderland!~ Beautiful! You make me see an old tale in new light!! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I'm glad this came back up here because I missed it earlier glad I didn't miss it this go round |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
enjoyed as usual Now feel your fear, there can be only one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Ah, you guys are great, thank you!!!~ |
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