Open Poetry #40 |
Sigh |
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
The moon Worn and sapped is silently down The night bored and tired, has closed its eyes. Life long waiting, No true love in sight. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is hauntingly beautiful and sad. very touching. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh indeed love this one |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Life long waiting, No true love in sight." painful words so often true Drauntz beautifully done... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That's a sigh I echo all too often... perhaps because hope is resurrected almost as often as the moon. *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful spell you cast here...lovely flow to your thoughts. TD |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
brief and to the point |
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