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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
The worlds I fear wash away the day Sleeping through an unmade life To dream away some mundane fate With nothing left to look forward to A constant disappointment In that simple fact Nothing numbs numbness Never found a mask At the bottom of another glass Just an overdose of anaesthetic In this empty world Simple sadness whispers The oldest unfair name That utterance of unknown pain; Hope Won't hide the absence of decay Becomes more depressing than despair I wish I knew what else to say, all I can manage is; Sometimes things are better when left unsaid I wish I'd realized the things that words can't say Until you paint them grey "Everything is vague to a degree you do not realize till you have tried to make it precise." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad stuff I can understand |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Nothing wrong with your writing,in fact you write good stuff, but sad to know you are "wallowing in self pity", that gets one nowhere. sincerely. Martyjo |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Hope Won't hide the absence of decay Becomes more depressing than despair" woaaaa...powerful lines...superb write... |
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