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Open Poetry #40

Rush

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-31 12:37 PM

Here we go,

Rush

twenty minutes
and you'll be gone
twenty short minutes
but i'll take the shot

i need to stop you
and make you listen
my last chance words
my last card in hand

i'm rushing
i'm rushing back to you
just twenty minutes
and you will be gone

rush
all i can do is to rush
find you and stop you
in a rush
of love

ten minutes
time passes quickly
i'm halfaway there
half the time left
just ten minutes
ten short minutes
and you'll be gone

i need to stop you
and i need to kiss you
my last chance kiss
my last card in hand

i'm rushing
i'm rushing back to you
just ten short minutes
and you will be gone

rush
my last hope is to rush
to find you and make you stop
in a single rush
of love

time's up
i have arrived
i'm seeing you
next to the exit
ready to leave

no more minutes
no more second thoughts
it's time for the final rush
to make you stop
in a single rush
of love

rush
my last hope was to rush
i got in time
i found you and i made you stopo
in a single rush of love

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-03-31 10:33 AM

Wow! I felt this rush and I am very happy for the happy end!

Great work, carrying a tangible suspense!

Love,
Margherita

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