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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-30 09:38 PM


   Nature draws the heart
of lonely souls seeking sun
   'til Love finds a way!


[many apologies from this 'free-verse'
  minimalist...if the above is not
   perfect form?!]

© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-03-30 11:22 PM


perfect enough. how true.
Margherita
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2 posted 2007-03-31 10:22 AM


Very beautiful!

I love the haiku and senryu forms. I think this is a good one indeed.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-03-31 10:57 AM


outstanding!
INclan
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4 posted 2007-04-02 09:45 PM


I have read three posting from you and enjoyed each.  Stop apologizing and write!
INclan

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5 posted 2007-04-02 10:55 PM



BEAUTIFUL!!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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6 posted 2007-06-22 12:15 PM


This is so true!!! I feel the same way about Nature!!!
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with you
7 posted 2007-06-22 12:23 PM




very nicely done!!

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Gaia
8 posted 2007-06-25 10:39 PM


How did I miss this?

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2007-06-25 11:09 PM


I love love and nature ~ so this beautiful senryu was doubly delightful!



Linda

Robert Jordan
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10 posted 2007-06-26 04:48 PM


Bruce,

This works well as a senryu.  It follows the rules.

Bobby

paullallady
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11 posted 2007-06-28 08:01 PM


this is so true, and so very beautiful. wonderful.
The Lady
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12 posted 2007-07-01 01:30 AM




excellent poet


SmartChick
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13 posted 2007-07-01 01:43 AM


Absolutely beautiful!
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14 posted 2007-07-02 12:37 PM


Lovely...
    Ummmm, is this... optimistic?

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