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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-30 09:38 PM

   Nature draws the heart
of lonely souls seeking sun
   'til Love finds a way!

[many apologies from this 'free-verse'
  minimalist...if the above is not
   perfect form?!]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-03-30 11:22 PM

perfect enough. how true.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-03-31 10:22 AM

Very beautiful!

I love the haiku and senryu forms. I think this is a good one indeed.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-31 10:57 AM

outstanding!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2007-04-02 09:45 PM

I have read three posting from you and enjoyed each. Stop apologizing and write!
INclan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-04-02 10:55 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

6 posted 2007-06-22 12:15 PM

This is so true!!! I feel the same way about Nature!!!

SEA

Moderator

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2007-06-22 12:23 PM

very nicely done!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2007-06-25 10:39 PM

How did I miss this?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-06-25 11:09 PM

I love love and nature ~ so this beautiful senryu was doubly delightful!

Linda

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

10 posted 2007-06-26 04:48 PM

Bruce,

This works well as a senryu. It follows the rules.

Bobby

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

11 posted 2007-06-28 08:01 PM

this is so true, and so very beautiful. wonderful.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

12 posted 2007-07-01 01:30 AM

excellent poet

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2007-07-01 01:43 AM

Absolutely beautiful!

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

14 posted 2007-07-02 12:37 PM

Lovely...
Ummmm, is this... optimistic?

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