Open Poetry #40 |
The Juxtapose |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Juxtapose I cannot stop the juxtapose Nor the odors in my nose The light slips underneath my lid And shakes the slumber of my ID I cannot push away the flow The creeping light that says hello The bright that makes each mornings bid And wakes this sleeping hominid It is each day a frightening sail The fear of facing Jonas’s whale The compromise of one on one When all is said and all is done We all look out the window frame To see a purpose to our aim But still it stays within my head We really sleep a single bed Still let us say you could move in It’s two to one we’d live in sin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lol .... thanks for the warm smiles this cold Saturday morning Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top o' the mornin', T-Man! You are one mighty clever hominid ~ and one with an adorable hint of naughtiness! "It is each day a frightening sail The fear of facing Jonas’s whale" ~ Methinks that it be Jona's Whale, That be afraid when ye set sail! (winky winky) Loves 'n hugs 'n angel kisses, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Me thinks it was Randy Dragon who was writing this morning. Chris, Your smile is my pay for the day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Your writes are always refreshing with my cup of coffee. Outstanding job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders Always a pleasure to be of service. Thank you |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Hi Seymore With such thoughts i would be delited to wake up every morning he he. Nice write Smiles and best wishes Jes / Dreamer |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes LOL I'm smiling. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Did I ever tell you that it is that "naughty and nice" about you that is the foundation of all that charm of yours? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, No but I'm glad you told me. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... yes, I'm smiling here too!! loved this write of yours RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
whether Randy Dragon or Sir Sy this was a sinfully delicious write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Glad you enjoyed the write and thank you for the sweet reply. Lady, Just sinful enough to spice it up. LOL Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... Randy stole your pen and breathed a little fire, didn't he? *S* This is wonderful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Glad you were amused and thanks for the catchup. |
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