Open Poetry #40 |
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March 28 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. There is a sickly sheen To your skin Even in this light at night One doesn’t feel much confidence You’ll be with us for very long I doubt you’re fooled By what the doctors say Religion the various philosophies A shooting star makes its way Across the bay I hear my name as I stand there Quietly from by the window sill And turn around into a gaze . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've spent too many nights at a hospital window, looking out on the tops of trees and trying to think about the night. This brings it all back. Effective, and sad. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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