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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Blue Mixed with gray A dry space In what is not Where moisture Should have been The long single note Repeated in lieu of song A fine misty rain Is falling on the world . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow Now feel your fear, there can be only one |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all Snowflake it is particularly nourishing when someone unfamiliar comes out of the forest to favorably comment on a poem, ( though one of course would miss his usual supporters). Yet thanks all again John . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
your smooth poems have slipped my soul many times. Sky? has time to cry Eye? has time to wet desert? has time to rain car? lost roof pane. Only on the screen, the tears of heart drizzle down drop by drop into poem. they will be for ever there when one left. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
the long single note, I love that. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
ohhhhhhhhhh..... This just gave me chills up my spine, it is so beautiful, with the stark imagery and the sound of the long single note. This is perfection. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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