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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Just tell how you like it holding back stop when you turn never get to sleep need that moment wait a second nobody is perfect some dust in future in darkest place beautiful face. We were occupied stayed up nights for some brief time why must there be depart dates breakages feel blue miss another heart when you grow lonely had something to say over open bottles beautiful face hard to trace. How you like it so easy to play for affection hypnotise won't be long before hunger is gone drinking language moments words syphon in create rosy cheeks and cold cream covers slip gently away such beauty unspoken Postmodern ideas there before then words touch someone's skin hairs just say your likes pick a word a love sound. just to say in darkest places beautiful face pretty little cameos after wine softly erased. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-30-2007 08:59 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Martin, this is one of your best I think I do like it a lot! |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Thanks but honestly I don't think it is... you never know what treasures someone else may find 
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