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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Cobalt sky Passion-poisoned leaves trellis forest paths compounding moods loosely strung between springtime hope and wintry despair. Past hidden lair of copperhead-stare, a lone falcon flying high skirts wooded way in search of prey, where no mock-cliff cities loom; and booming bullfrogs rivet dreams of springtime thaws and toe-dangle streams. My eyes seek the reach of towering Beech to brush a cobalt sky! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun A delightful write and a delight to read.  |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Absolutely beautiful! I love the air of a change coming, but now quite here. Lovely work!!! ~~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wonderful ‘Nature Imagery’! [finely typical of this author]... I love the thematic ‘rebirth’ of life from the dead ground.... as Winter tranposes into Spring...and, how our mood may be drawn along with said changes from despair to hope's renewal until it is soaring with that falcon above the dark, the toxic and the man-made/commonplace; etc. May all our spirits this Spring chance to brush that ‘cobalt sky'! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (03-27-2007 06:02 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Humble thank yous for your time and replies! Warm Spring days have a way of generating thoughts of hope, rebirthing opportunities. |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
a deep rooted experience. Jak |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ahhhhhh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great picture painted well, my Kacy! Reminds me of Ohio in autumn or early spring.  ....jo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy...hi Where is this place? It must be within your vibrant spirit. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aye Kacy, these warm Pa spring days do tend to do that to a person. Very fine writing, and darn it is sooo good to be reading you again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 It feels like SPRING this morning!The sky is truly a brilliant energetic cobalt blue today! You need not be a van Gogh to capture today's magnificent colors. Anyone care to splash LIFE's vibrancy with me?  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-30-2007 11:59 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We were fortunate in that spring came so early to some.... we've had so much joyous rain! Only the car techies are drenched in drops...  The rest of us are wholly greatful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My eyes seek the reach of towering Beech to brush a cobalt sky! How I love the cobalt sky! And you, dear Kacy, created a wonderful sequence of images here! Love, Margherita  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
could have copied it all for favorite lines...such a cadence to this altogether excellent write... |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
a beautiful picture painted with beautiful words. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
So Guess who this is????????? Happy Easter Kacy Midnitesun! Do you have any plans for the weekend? I am going with Elizabeth to a gathering at Martie's house after church. I have grown impatient of geting tech help with Mr. J. I got him talking again and the added feedback (which Braille allone was not giving me) was enough info to post a reply. I'm so happy (jumps around and claps hands in air) Let me know if you got my contact info Okay? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a beautiful spring Kacy love those "toe-dangle streams" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent, you have a brush filled to the brim with such magical and mystical words. All a pleasure to read. |
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