Open Poetry #40 |
Don't Say Something You'll Regret |
divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Don't Say Something You'll Regret Such a defensive reply to easily the shortest email I've ever sent. A few lines clicked off hastily a breath or two after you left then I pressed send, unhappily. I pondered slow your quick reply to wisely choose the words I send -- nothing I'll regret? and I believe the words that really tend to be regrettable are those that lie dormant on my tongue and then they gag me with the need to be released, to fly upon the wind, freed from jaw clenched captivity where wisdom wisely holds them in, eroding tastebuds with acidity The words are not of anger born but from the years of sad regret that with the dawning of each morn The heart refuses to forget and memories cannot be torn from the soul where they are etched Regrettable, the words tossed high to God, that he might hear my pleas "Oh Lord of all the earth and sky, Please grant to me a sweet release from this hellish pain," but I know that He will only ease it 'til the words that ever lie silenced on my tongue are free, in jigsaw puzzle phrases I have put together perfectly that you might clearly hear the cry and understand it ... finally. "Don't say something you'll regret" Your defensive reply to easily the shortest email I've ever sent, a few lines clicked off hastily a breath or two after you left And I shall silence my reply, unsaid but unforgettable, and piece together phrases, I have found yet unattainable, from the words that hide behind a silence, still unbreakable. Those are the only words that I will ever find regrettable By words the mind is winged ~Aristophanes~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A powerful ‘write’....granting us much to think about!.... (particularly all that remains forever ‘unspoken’)..... touching upon things that likely each of us has felt. I particularly liked (and related to): “The words are not of anger born but from the years of sad regret that with the dawning of each morn The heart refuses to forget and memories cannot be torn from the soul where they are etched” P.S.: As a 'Universalist' [Complexity/Chaos Scientist], I also love the 'UserName': "divine chaos"! |
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Aurelian Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 109TX, USA |
How very true. I can feel your heart in every line. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
thanks for the read, both of you *smiles* it was a tough one to put in words, but it demanded to be written. ~sheli~ ps: "divine chaos" is the name i chose after my daughter was born, 'cause my life has been a divine chaos ever since she entered it By words the mind is winged ~Aristophanes~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I told you how I felt about this poem. Please, keep your hair intact. This poem -- goes beyond most I have ever read. I read it several times and when I read it out loud, I knew ... I knew that is, in my humble opinion, perfect. You move me and I am in awe of you for many reasons -- one of which that you are among one of my most loved best friends. Alison |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent. Words I have heard my husband use more than once. He would never engage in an argument nor speak in anger for the very reason you express. BUT slience is just as hard to take sometimes. martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can understand this one perfectly well written! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Ali, I'm pretty sure you're my biggest fan *smiles* and I'm positive that you are one of my most trusted, most loved and best friends. Thank you, honey, for just .... being. martyjo, thanks for the read. I think the silence is the worst really, but the man that inspired this is more like your husband. He hates to argue --but, will bottle it all up until he blows. I hate blowing up more than I hate arguing, so I try to vent .... without saying anything I'll regret *chuckles* it takes hella willpower sometimes shadows ... thanks for the read! This is the first I've been able to write for a long time ... ya know, it really blows that he's gotta get me that riled up before I can write something halfway decent *smiles* |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
darlin? I AM your biggest fan -- hands down! Love you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The words are not of anger born but from the years of sad regret that with the dawning of each morn The heart refuses to forget and memories cannot be torn from the soul where they are etched" ~ So poetically poignant. An exceptionally emotive write that touches the heart of this reader. You've been missed. Giving you a warm welcome-back hug, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is mine to know, that hash words come from being hurt, and do not mean the harshness they sound.... wonderfully polemic, bearing great truth... hugs |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WOW !!! my fav lines "The words are not of anger born but from the years of sad regret" goodgoodgood stuff your poetry |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
emotionally descriptive and touching, what an amazing write! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerfully written from a heart that knows these feelings...having experienced them myself I have to say you have said it perfectly...*Big Hugs* |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
zi, I love you -- I'll make ya a button or sumfin, since you're my #1 fan! Linda, if it touches only one, it's worth the tears to write it, no? *smiles* I've missed the sharing, but have run into another writer's block it seems .. but I'm still here, wandering through the blue, even if I rarely have time to post *warm hugs to you* LeeJ, you hit the nail on the head there, hon Thankfully, he knows where the harshness comes from too ... but sometimes, even though he knows, I can be rather venomous when provoked, so he always gives me that reminder ... not to say anything i'll regret. 1slick_lady ... thanks for the read *smiles* so glad you enjoyed it paullallady - thanks for the read Startime55 - thanks ever so *big hugs backatcha* ya know, i've always found it amazing that people i've never met can read my poetry and just "get" what I'm saying ..... and the annoyingly irritating subject of my poetry, who has known me for over 2 decades, has to be beaten about the head and shoulders with it for years before he understands *chuckles* I think that's one of the reasons I post here .... just to make sure that I'm still able to be clear, 'cause he makes me wonder sometimes if I'm speaking a different language *grins* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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