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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2007-03-23 11:42 AM



Don't Say Something You'll Regret


Such a defensive reply to easily
the shortest email I've ever sent.
A few lines clicked off hastily
a breath or two after you left
then I pressed send, unhappily.

I pondered slow your quick reply
to wisely choose the words I send
-- nothing I'll regret? and I
believe the words that really tend
to be regrettable are those that lie
dormant on my tongue and then

they gag me with the need to be
released, to fly upon the wind,
freed from jaw clenched captivity
where wisdom wisely holds them in,
eroding tastebuds with acidity

The words are not of anger born
but from the years of sad regret
that with the dawning of each morn
The heart refuses to forget
and memories cannot be torn
from the soul where they are etched

Regrettable, the words tossed high
to God, that he might hear my pleas
"Oh Lord of all the earth and sky,
Please grant to me a sweet release
from this hellish pain," but I
know that He will only ease
it 'til the words that ever lie
silenced on my tongue are free,
in jigsaw puzzle phrases I
have put together perfectly
that you might clearly hear the cry
and understand it ... finally.

"Don't say something you'll regret"
Your defensive reply to easily
the shortest email I've ever sent,
a few lines clicked off hastily
a breath or two after you left

And I shall silence my reply,
unsaid but unforgettable,
and piece together phrases, I
have found yet unattainable,
from the words that hide behind
a silence, still unbreakable.
Those are the only words that I
will ever find regrettable


By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

© Copyright 2007 Sheli Carmichael - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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1 posted 2007-03-23 09:26 PM


A powerful ‘write’....granting us
much to think about!....
(particularly all that remains
forever ‘unspoken’).....
touching upon things that likely
each of us has felt.

I particularly liked (and related to):

“The words are not of anger born
but from the years of sad regret
that with the dawning of each morn
The heart refuses to forget
and memories cannot be torn
from the soul where they are etched”

P.S.: As a 'Universalist' [Complexity/Chaos
      Scientist], I also love the 'UserName':
      "divine chaos"!


Aurelian
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since 2007-03-20
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2 posted 2007-03-23 09:36 PM


How very true. I can feel your heart in every line.
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2007-03-23 11:43 PM


thanks for the read, both of you *smiles*  
it was a tough one to put in words, but it demanded to be written.

~sheli~

ps:  "divine chaos" is the name i chose after my daughter was born, 'cause my life has been a divine chaos ever since she entered it  


By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

aziza
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4 posted 2007-03-24 01:49 AM


I told you how I felt about this poem.  Please, keep your hair intact.  This poem -- goes beyond most I have ever read.  I read it several times and when I read it out loud, I knew ... I knew that is, in my humble opinion, perfect.  You move me and I am in awe of you for many reasons -- one of which that you are among one of my most loved best friends.

Alison

latearrival
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5 posted 2007-03-24 02:25 AM


Excellent. Words I have heard my husband use more than once. He would never engage in an argument nor speak in anger for the very reason you express. BUT slience is just as hard to take sometimes. martyjo
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2007-03-24 07:22 AM


I can understand this one perfectly

well written!

divine chaos
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7 posted 2007-03-24 07:41 AM


Ali, I'm pretty sure you're my biggest fan *smiles* and I'm positive that you are one of my most trusted, most loved and best friends.   Thank you, honey, for just .... being.  

martyjo, thanks for the read.   I think the silence is the worst really, but the man that inspired this is more like your husband.  He hates to argue --but, will bottle it all up until he blows.  I hate blowing up more than I hate arguing, so I try to vent .... without saying anything I'll regret *chuckles*  it takes hella willpower sometimes

shadows ... thanks for the read!   This is the first I've been able to write for a long time ... ya know, it really blows that he's gotta get me that riled up before I can write something halfway decent *smiles*  

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
8 posted 2007-04-27 12:49 PM


darlin?

I AM your biggest fan -- hands down!

Love you

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2007-04-27 11:09 AM


"The words are not of anger born
but from the years of sad regret
that with the dawning of each morn
The heart refuses to forget
and memories cannot be torn
from the soul where they are etched"

~ So poetically poignant. An exceptionally emotive write that touches the heart of this reader.

You've been missed.

Giving you a warm welcome-back hug,

EA

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

10 posted 2007-04-27 11:47 AM


it is mine to know, that hash words come from being hurt, and do not mean the harshness they sound....

wonderfully polemic, bearing great truth...

hugs


1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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11 posted 2007-04-27 02:37 PM


WOW !!!


my fav lines

"The words are not of anger born
but from the years of sad regret"

goodgoodgood stuff your poetry

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
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12 posted 2007-04-27 03:46 PM


emotionally descriptive and touching, what an amazing write!
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
13 posted 2007-04-27 04:28 PM


Powerfully written from a heart that knows these feelings...having experienced them myself I have to say you have said it perfectly...*Big Hugs*
divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
14 posted 2007-04-28 09:33 AM


zi, I love you -- I'll make ya a button or sumfin, since you're my #1 fan!

Linda, if it touches only one, it's worth the tears to write it, no?  *smiles*   I've missed the sharing, but have run into another writer's block it seems .. but I'm still here, wandering through the blue, even if I rarely have time to post *warm hugs to you*

LeeJ, you hit the nail on the head there, hon   Thankfully, he knows where the harshness comes from too ... but sometimes, even though he knows, I can be rather venomous when provoked, so he always gives me that reminder ... not to say anything i'll regret.  

1slick_lady ... thanks for the read *smiles*  so glad you enjoyed it

paullallady - thanks for the read

Startime55 - thanks ever so *big hugs backatcha*  

ya know, i've always found it amazing that people i've never met can read my poetry and just "get" what I'm saying ..... and the annoyingly irritating subject of my poetry, who has known me for over 2 decades, has to be beaten about the head and shoulders with it for years before he understands *chuckles*  I think that's one of the reasons I post here .... just to make sure that I'm still able to be clear, 'cause he makes me wonder sometimes if I'm speaking a different language *grins*

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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