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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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 Artist: Gabriel Rossetti Lost Love ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamt of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, Whilst baaing white woolies around us did flock. The heather did sway in the earthy, spring breeze. And the day had been one of both harmony and ease. As we lay amongst flowers, I soon saw in his eyes, A far-away look ~ to my chagrin and surprise. His demeanor had changed, in what seemed but an instant. He became cool and aloof ~ and ever so distant. I queried the reason, and he then did impart, That another fair lassie had captured his heart. It felt as tho’ nor’winds had sucked out my soul. I was shattered inside and feared losing control. But somehow I knew that I would be fine, For the spirit within me would continue to shine. In lieu of protesting and pounding his chest, I proclaimed that our parting wouldst be for the best. It was he who then showed his utter surprise, As he saw the strength in my steady, green eyes. I turned and bestowed him a sweet buss on the cheek. He appeared rather puzzled and suddenly meek. I wished him well, as I rose from the grass, Saying, “May you be happy with your new bonnie lass.” I head ‘cross the heather with my head held high, Which belied the sadness and tears I did cry. As I stifled the rise of a wailing banshee, The sun broke thru’ clouds and shone upon me. As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamt of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, Whilst baaing white woolies around us did flock. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW!! That was so great! I wish I could do that...  flawless... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SEA ~ Why thank you, Sweet Sea, for such a complimentary and enthusiastic response to my poetic efforts! It was VERY good to hear from you! Love & Light 'n a big warm hug! EA ~ That's SEA without the "S"!  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Superb ‘write’ !..... and...in my ever-most-humble opinion, Scotland is the most beautiful place on Earth! (I truly lost my heart to that 'bonnie lass' of a nation!)..... [As a geologist, poet?!, and ‘imager’ (of Celtic ancestry), I especially love the western highlands (Glencoe specifically)] I particularly LOVED the following: “ As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamt of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, Whilst baaing white woolies around us did flock. The heather did sway in the earthy, spring breeze. And the day had been one of both harmony and ease. As we lay amongst flowers, I soon saw in his eyes, A far-away look ~ to my chagrin and surprise ” |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
And I so loved this strenght and pride,that might have made him wonder if he made the right choice.LOL "In lieu of protesting and pounding his chest, I proclaimed that our parting wouldst be for the best. It was he who then showed his utter surprise, As he saw the strength in my steady, green eyes. I turned and bestowed him a sweet buss on the cheek. He appeared rather puzzled and suddenly meek. I wished him well, as I rose from the grass, Saying, “May you be happy with your new bonnie lass" martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are a gifted writer Linda so glad you share |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I head ‘cross the heather with my head held high, Which belied the sadness and tears I did cry. As I stifled the rise of a wailing banshee, The sun broke thru’ clouds and shone upon me." this was perfect in words and feelings... I loved it and it made me smile remembering those exact feelings and actions  Maureen |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I sure remember my first love. This is beautiful, Linda. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce ~ Thank you, kind sir! Your reply added sparkle to this lassie's blue eyes!  Lassie/Colleen Linda (I'm half 'n half) lol |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
latearrival ~ Hi, martyjo! This poem is loosely based on a "Lost Love" experience of mine. My reaction to his devastating profession, had its desired effect and I maintained my composure and dignity! ~ and the sun continued to shine! Loving hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One Whose Shadows Are Passing ~ Greetings, Dixie! That was an especially sweet ~ and generous! ~ thing for you to say! Thank you so much!!! Love & hugs to you! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Naked One ~ Hi, there, Maureen! I appreciated you sharing that! You go, girl! As they say, "Never let them see you sweat!" lol Warm hug ~ warm smile, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Smartest Chick ~ Hi, Sue! Aw, yes! I remember my first love as well! ~ Fondly ~ and not so fondly!  Happy springtime hugs, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah I love the pluck you showed us Linda Angel and the mood you set... "On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, Whilst baaing white woolies around us did flock." 'tis a bonny poem for sure |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
his loss, my gain  sweet poem earth angel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
There is nothing you cannot write about, Linda, and write about it exquisitely! The poem's impeccable! Hope all is well.......KBHBLY.....lily jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lady Kate ~ At times we women have more strength and class than we give ourselves credit for. Many a man has tried to lord it over the fairer sex and sling arrows into our trusting, loving hearts. Thank you for your wonderful response! Loving hug, Your "LA" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
howardsu ~ Oh, you little rascal! I certainly got a twitter or two from your charming reply!EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ With praise like that, you're sure to pass the Pearly Gates with flying colours when your time does come! ~ Which hopefully is a long time in comin'!!!  Thank you so much, lily jo! Your support and appreciation of my poetic efforts are invaluable to me! KBHBLY 2 Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for dropping by, Island Man! Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
As specks of gold glittered in an ebony sky, I dreamt of my lost love who bade me good-bye. On the emerald shore of a fair lowlands loch, Whilst baaing white woolies around us did flock. Aye, ya are a blessing indeed, indeed… But to think your love would ever say goodbye? No way! I would bonk him upside the head with the “Blarney Stone” He would be in a pickle for the rest of his life. Excellent write, EA... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetEarthyOne~ You write the pieces that give us all so much pleasure to read~ A lovely offering from you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
holy hell ive been missin out Now feel your fear, there can be only one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL ~ A valiant response, Kind Knight! Your honorable armor is shining! Angel Lassie curtseying, AL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margie Lass ~ ...as do you, dear poetess! Thank you for your sweet response! May your day be a glorious one! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot Flakes! Where the hell have you been? lol Still full of beans, I see! ~ and I like beans! lolGood to hear from you! EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could ditto secondhanddreampoet... I never knew I could fall in love with a country... until I did. *S* This is beautiful, my friend... and the strength she shows in the face of adversity is what I've come to expect from you! *S* Excellent! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern One ~ There you are! Where the 'Belle' have you been! It is wonderful to hear from you this fine spring afternoon! I appreciate your comment on my poem and the kind words for me! Giving you a big, 'springy' hug, Linda |
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