Open Poetry #40 |
The Leprechaun and the Raven |
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The Leprechaun and the Raven ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ Through the open shutters, I spied a leprechaun, Dancing in my garden in the early rays of dawn. I stood quite still and listened to his singsong incantations, He sang from deep within his soul of his joys and lamentations. He’d spin and twirl, leap and prance ~ kicking his heels high, With flap of arms he tried to rise in to the rainbowed sky. He landed on his bottom but his smile belied his pain. He then popped up with alacrity and then he tried again. The flapping and the waving,. soon tired his little arms. ~ “Its seems that I'm a leprechaun, who has lost his lucky charms!” Lines of sheer frustration soon etched his elfin face. He raised a tiny fist up high, trilling, “This is a disgrace!” “My fairy friends have gossamer wings and flit about the sky But here sit I, stuck on the ground, “Oh me! Oh me! Oh my!” He sauntered through the garden paths, alone and feeling blue, ~ Knowing what he wanted, but not knowing what to do. The elf then heard a raven cawing out his name. He couldn't bear to meet its eyes, as his head hung down in shame. “What seems to be the problem?”, the bird asked quizzically. “May I lend you a helping wing, and end your misery.” “Thank you for your kindness, but there’s nothing you can do. I’m just a hapless, wingless elf who can't fly in yonder blue.” “I do not have gossamer wings to lift me in the air, I only have two useless arms that cannot fly me there.” “Rejoice, my friend, the time has come, for the bell of joy to ring. Hop aboard this air express, flown by feathered wing. He climbed aboard the raven’s back and held on very tight. And soon the two were swooping through skies so blue and bright. The leprechaun trilled joyously as he beheld all he did see, He was even happier than he dreamed he'd ever be. Lakes lie there before him, and rivers, hills and streams, ~ Everything far lovelier, than those seen in his dreams. The world was so much bigger than he ever thought it’d be It stretched for miles and miles ~ from sea to shimmering sea. When the flight was over, the crow cawed, “Don’t be blue. Whenever you would like to fly, I’ll come around for you.” He felt a sense of freedom, and a peace within himself. He no longer envied others, for he was happy to be an elf. “Happiness is a state of mind. Think happy! ~ Be happy!” ~ Linda L. Dowd |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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Well, well well, what a marvelous story teaming with energy and a wee bit sense of magic... elegantly done dear lady, and how are we doing today? Hope all is well.... Love ya Me |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"He landed on his bottom but his smile belied his pain. He then popped up with alacrity and then he tried again. He felt a sense of freedom, and a peace within himself. He no longer envied others, for he was happy to be an elf." Great write, but these two verses hit the spot! Big Hug To Ya! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Linda, Now if only you could give us all wings! Ivor |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful, Linda M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
truly delightful Linda Angel... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
This girl of Irish ancestry adores your poem! It just goes to show ya, you might not know where your friends are ~ but one is sure to show up to help you when your little butt is hittin' the ground over and over! Happy St. Patricks to ye, and may all yer beer be grrreen as the Emerald Isle Caroline |
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Lee ~ My colleen blood runs green on St. Paddy's Day! The sap within me begins to rise as Spring is right around the bend! Sending you lots of love and Irish Good Luck! Linda |
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JL ~ Irish greetings! Sending you a pint of green beer and a bouquet of shamrocks for your bonny reply! Love & lots of good Irish luck, EA |
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Naked One ~ Thanks, M! May the cheeriness of St. Paddy's day be with you always! Love & the luck of the Irish, Linda |
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Lady Kate ~ I am always delighted when you drop by! Thank you! Love & the luck of the Irish, Linda |
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Ivor ~ I am sending to you, an extra pair of wings to go with the ones that you already have! Love & Irish Blessings, Linda |
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icequeen ~ Awww, what a sweet colleen of a reply, Caroline! Celtic blood of the isles runs through my veins as well! Love & Irish blessings, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Linda, this is magical. You have a special connection to elves and your poetry reflects this delightfully. (I confess I did not know about the leprechaun, I think I will read your poem over the phone to my Irish sister in law, she will adore it) Love and hugs. Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
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neat story nicely told...it reads so well... |
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since 2002-08-27
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Margherita ~ Irish smiles across the miles to you, my friend! ~ and to your sister-in-law as well! Thank you for your lovely reply! It tickled me emerald green! May the winds of good fortune blow gently upon your back! Sending you love and lots of Irish good luck! Lindy Lou |
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steave ~ Greetings! Top o' the evenin' to ya! I appreciate you dropping by and leaving such a lovely reply! Loves 'n hugs 'n Irish mugs! Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your tales are a delight... as are you. *S* |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Beautiful story, and beautifully well told. You gave me wings for a while today! Thanks, Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Suthern Belle ~ I'm just a little ramblin' raconteur! lol So pleased that you dropped by, my dear southern friend! Loves 'n hugs 'n a big springtime smile, Lind |
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Terry ~ Thank you, so much! ~ May your own wings carry you high and far and safely! Happy springtime hugs, Linda |
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