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Open Poetry #40

The End Of The Game

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-22 07:40 PM

Thanks all of you who reply so warmly to my poems.
i'm happy you all like them.

Here we go,

The End of the Game

Finally i arrived
to that high stage
that unreachable level
finally i discovered your secrets
the secrets of your love

i walked the first steps
in the end of the game
where everything now is serious
everything is harder

i grabbed the key
the key to your heart
and finally won

finally i passed
the end of the game
the game of our love
but know everything is serious
no more games
now we face reality, love,
and fate

now everything is real
we have true love between us
and i don't care if it is hard
i want to try with you

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-03-23 09:44 PM

From one 'dreamer'
to another
may I just say:

fine poem-post!

I particularly like:

“ i walked the first steps
in the end of the game
where everything now is serious
everything is harder ”

and:

” finally i passed
the end of the game
the game of our love
but know everything is serious
no more games
now we face reality, love,
and fate ”

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2007-03-24 09:14 AM

now everything is real
we have true love between us
and i don't care if it is hard
i want to try with you

should be that way from the beginning...playing games doesn't always work out for the best

M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-03-24 09:29 AM

May the reality of your love surpass all your dreams! ~ and games! lol

I enjoyed the spirit and the sweetness of this write! Be happy!

Loving Light,

EA

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

4 posted 2007-03-25 05:04 AM

Thanks for your warm replies. i'm happy you liked it. i loved writing this one!!..

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