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Mandolin Memories
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Mandolin Memories |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Mandolin Memories (and Love Reborn?) I have known ‘wisdom’ lost in knowledge... knowledge missed in ‘information’; and finest chance surrendered to well-worn complacency... which proved no ‘soul-salvation’! Only True Love’s finest moments gave Time any meaning... remaining in memory both ‘moving’....yet immovable, not desiring....but desirable, anchoring self within selflessness! May Love rise once more from the ash of burning roses... in dark and lonely rooms where heart-dream echoes lie sleeping mid the tenuous strains of distant mandolins... notes in sliding harmony and chords of passion’s liquid fire! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful tone and texture to this piece Bruce. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the wording you used here nicely done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 sigh, hearing those strings of love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
   A soul moving piece! ~ARH |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so very lovely. Very much enjoyed the feeling this piece left me with. Nancy~  ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I am in awe of your talent. |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Well damn, you weren't kidding about that "incurable Romanticism." I tend to veer away from love poetry but this one really caught my eye. I have no critique; you nailed it the first time. This is a fine piece of work. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Brava... Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A beautiful poem with romance woven perfectly into it....It bring out the romantic in this reader...Well done... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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