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Open Poetry #40

Close Your Eyes

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-03-21 08:44 PM

Thanks all for your nice replies to my poems...makes me really happy to know people understand how i feel.

Here we go,

Close your Eyes

close your eyes
feel the magic
close your eyes
feel my kiss
close your eyes
and smile

close your eyes
and hug me
close your eyes
and take my hand

now you understand
that you don't need to see
to be able to give love
and you don't need to see
to be able to receive love

close your eyes
give me a kiss
close your eyes
and hear me
telling you that i love you

jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2007-03-21 08:50 PM

calming, pleasant

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-03-22 07:52 AM

this is sweet

I like it!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2007-03-22 09:24 AM

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2007-03-22 01:17 PM

Romantically Beautiful...When I close my eyes your words come to life in the image of my husband...Well done...**Big Hugs**

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

5 posted 2007-03-22 02:15 PM

I like it, its very calming and moving

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2007-03-22 04:19 PM

I hope he does hear you....I like this alot!!!

MySpace Codes

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

7 posted 2007-03-22 07:36 PM

Thanks all for your replies...and yes, i hope she will hear me someday..
Thanks!

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