Open Poetry #40 |
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The chamber of silent hell |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
It takes you, takes you by surprise, jumps out from hidden places, Its strong, destructive and stubbourn. It sticks to you, never leaving your side, linked to you, every second of every day, refusing to leave. refusing to give in. It sucks you in making it hard to breathe, sucking out all the air so theres no life left in you, pressing down, crushing, destroying, breaking,killing off all the good things inside. Its slowly seeping into me, the poison that breaks me, leaving me hollow, empty, scarred. This is whats left, whats left of my soul. The chamber of silent hell. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like you could be talking about alcohol ...this is what I relate to nicely written |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
We find a lot of chambers in hell don't we!!?? Welcome to passions!!!! I like your first post!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Do you think I could make any improvements? |
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