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Impetuous Dawn
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Impetuous Dawn |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Impetuous Dawn Snows have gone, but for the morning frost Unbeknownst to time, the winter coating lost Oblivious to overtures of patient caveat The forward spin trades out for in Set, ready matters not Dawn dancer sighs the bare of morning globe Elite conductor shifts the colors of her robe Horizon full, lifts light in gala ball While songs of ready set are met Time ceases not at all Impetuous, these wing beats saunter forth A warming trend entices to the north Again, again, takes turn in questions new Cease not the thrill, come hither shrill Of sudden rendezvous Copyright Kkh 3/20/07 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful this is |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a lovely poem, so much to like about it, but I chose these as my favorite lines "Dawn dancer sighs the bare of morning globe Elite conductor shifts the colors of her robe" needs to be bumped up for another go |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
elegant. it glides off the page. Jak |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The imagery you've left in kind for one and all to blend in mind is kismet met and fates concealed in lovely of words, a moment, revealed. |
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Aurelian Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 109TX, USA |
I like it. I like how the "sudden rendezvous" of the last line breaks into the swinging rhythm and brings it all into sharp focus. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Especially during this 'struggling' transition of seasons....the imagery of this write shines particularly fine. I hope the addition of my humble comment brings this poem back to the top of the 'P.I.P.' queue in celebration of Spring and Poesy! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, if it weren't for Bruce bumping this back up, I might have missed out on the joyous experience of reading this beauty! Well done, POETESSA!!!  Hugs and wishes for a happy Spring! EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful read on another transitional weather day. We've been embraced by snow, sun and rain in one week, and some confused robins are coming and going with bewildered beaks. YES, it IS definitely is spring! |
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