Open Poetry #40 |
Full of Possibilities |
howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
fortunately my May flower was already voyaging on her Mayflower the day i met her it would've been a lot worse if i had to regret her falling in love with another guy after we had a chance to see eye to eye at least she had a good reason to deny me her love howard |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your interpretation is a positive outlook that mitigates the bitterness. Well done! Love, Margherita |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Not having any "regret" does give one peace. Interesting write here, provokes much thought. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
nice letter to oneself kind of piece. I like it. I find myself wanting the first may flower to be something slightly phonetically different from the second, like spring flower, or day flower. not sure. thats the only part that held me up. Jak |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
it is jak thanks janette thanks margherita |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
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