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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-03-17 12:11 PM

Spring

Like soft hands caress my forehead,
And Gently lifts my hairs to spread.
Holding my face and kisses around,
they brush my eyes and tears come down.

Not quite right

Like showering under the lover’s eyesight,
Cleans with his bright warm light.
Wrapped in his fragrant whisper.
And stretches in the starry night.

Not quite right

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-17 06:28 AM

Welcome to Passions!

You will like it here. Nice poem and I will be reading more of you I hope.

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-03-17 08:27 AM

"Like showering under the lover’s eyesight," <---great line here

Welcome to Passions. I am sure you will see lots of great reads here you will enjoy and I look forward to more offerings of your work.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2007-03-17 09:41 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very very nice entrance piece!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-03-17 10:20 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your email for a Very
Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-03-17 10:47 AM

Thank you all. I do need encouragement. Do please feel free to make comments and suggestions my writings.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2007-03-17 11:18 AM

Welcome to Passions! Very nice poem.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2007-03-17 05:20 PM

Love your first post! It's nice to have you here. Enjoy...

miscellanea

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