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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-03-16 07:08 PM

My Dear Heart

Finally after a long wait
she is with me tonight,
and now everything
in my world of desire
seems to be allright.

My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight.

JamesLee
12March
2007

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-17 06:31 AM

I'm happy for you James

a much-deserved contentment

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-03-17 08:18 AM

"My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight."

Oh! Lucky her!

A romantic read ... enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2007-03-23 07:44 AM

Aurelian
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 109
TX, USA

4 posted 2007-03-23 09:06 AM

I liked everything except the word "allright." It seems to be a bit too casual for the tone of the poem - maybe "alight" would be better - just a suggestion.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-03-23 01:59 PM

"My dear heart,
you will know
the feelings
of content tonight."

~ and may you as well, Island Man!

aloha hugs,
Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2007-03-24 04:30 AM

James....... I'm having such good thougths for you and your suziepie xxx RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2007-03-24 09:05 AM

M

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

8 posted 2007-03-25 10:36 AM

Such a romantic write. Enjoyed.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-03-25 02:14 PM

ahhh James
how wonderful!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-03-25 06:13 PM

Thank you passing shadows, Janette, Romantic Heart, Aurelian, Earth Angel, Roniece, nakdthoughts, Eloise and The Lady for the wonderful responses...
Me and Suziepie are enjoying a wonderful trade wind filled weekend and future together...James

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