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Open Poetry #40

Look on Through

Sphinxen
Junior Member

since 2007-03-03

Posts 38
U.S.

0 posted 2007-03-11 02:21 PM

Just something I jotted down this morning.

Mirrors shift looks fade and grow
without the use of time or space
one moment beautiful and shiny new
the next a stranger looking down
I glance back up and look right through
a reflection of myself in you
a nun in a smoke screened convent
this cathedral built for two
survivors in a temptors brew
the herb is picked and ready
but missing in a haze
pull it through to use
and finish what you've started
I'll continue to look on through

"No one now dies of fatal truths, there are to many antidotes to them."- Nietzche

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-03-11 03:01 PM

I love this part

Mirrors shift looks fade and grow
without the use of time or space
one moment beautiful and shiny new
the next a stranger looking down
I glance back up and look right through
a reflection of myself in you

A

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-03-11 03:49 PM

They say that people always reflect a bit of ourselves. Sometimes it can be sad to say that it is true but to see love shining through is something we all can use. Enjoyed!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2007-03-11 04:18 PM

"I glance back up and look right through"

...neat concept...pleasant write

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