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Open Poetry #40

Just Like A Shark Attack

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-03-10 08:50 PM

Just Like A Shark Attack

I was catching some rays
at Turtle Bay
upon my favorite ocean.
The sun was intense,
and my back in need of
some suntan lotion.

A surfer girl walked by
so I let out a cry,
"Hey, can you lotion my back?"
She said "I will if you will."
and she got busy
just like a shark attack.

JamesLee
10March
2007

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-03-10 09:13 PM

I really like this.

A

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2007-03-10 10:31 PM

hehehehehe!

set me laughing.

enjoy

FNG

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-03-16 06:40 PM

Thank you aziza and FNG for the nice responses...James

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2007-03-18 10:12 AM

"She said "I will if you will.""

Hahahahah! Nice catch fisherman, and no painful bites either.

Very cute write here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-03-18 03:30 PM

thanks for the smiles and for the sunrays and the lightness of life ... even when there is the risk of a shark attack!

Love,
Margherita

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