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Feel Good Ink
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Feel Good Ink |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Feel Good Ink Ease in, as if love were a warm bath Nay, face the waves, swept in crisp awakening Washing the kilt from the warrior, clinging on tee shirt Actually to face the power of this sea, preparedly Leave external doubt upon the beach Dive in, without fret, more heart and less net Follow the tide, receding with the sweep of your hand New wave thoughts, hooking up is for the frail I swim in storms, float in tears, dive in depths Floaties flinch in the whirlpool pinch of a dream Laid back, worriless of the outcome Later, there is surf to sand still hot holding hand, the sun We carry degrees Fahrenheit there within us Soothing the water, as it swirls to conform What is it that you seek, in kisses warm? If not the rising tide of boundless emotions The volume of these feelings scintillate the notions That love is a sea of feel good ink Copyright Kkh 3/8/07 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"The volume of these feelings scintillate the notions That love is a sea of feel good ink" Ain't that the truth! Great write Kathy. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there are just so many wonderful lines in this poem...so many places that tease the mind and once again, you have not ceased to amaze...wonderful write |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Dive in, without fret, more heart and less net Follow the tide, receding with the sweep of your hand New wave thoughts, hooking up is for the frail I swim in storms, float in tears, dive in depths Floaties flinch in the whirlpool pinch of a dream The whole write is a wild painting, a vivid love poem, a tidal wave if you will, of indeed, feel good ink. Fabulous writing. I wish I had scenes like that in my mind!  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
fantastic writing! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I must agree this is a fantastic writing!!!!!!! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ah, Love... just say yes and dive in... martyjo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling I know this song: Dive into the curlicue of the waves come unto you feel the sting of frothy wing as it slaps your "anything" Anywhere and everywhere bubbles rising mock despair as you ride these tides as if you born to nakedness as natural as this!  and you were right--it felt GOOD!  oh I wanna seeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaa |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
ThisDiamond, I'd try this left justified, and in black ink. At present it's rather difficult to read. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially like: “.....swept in crisp awakening” ; “face the power of this sea..... Leave external doubt upon the beach”; “Follow the tide, receding with the sweep of your hand”; “I swim in storms, float in tears, dive in depths” |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah...to let the body rise and fall with each wave and see where it can take you...As I read this poem I saw different visions with each reading...I love it...so wise...*Big Hugs* |
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