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Open Poetry #40

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-03-07 09:44 PM

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So
We’ve lived our lives
Each alone
Though not without
Other company

And the time has come
To say goodbye
In a different year
And hour

Then I will wait for you
By the shore
Our boat is fit
And ready

To row you to
The island we never found
Where love is the only criterion

For us
To be
Finally happy

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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2007-03-07 10:21 PM

John,
An interesting write. I like that it presents hope.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-03-07 10:25 PM

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Larry C,

In ancient times the Japanese believed
that upon death a lady was rowed
to the Island of Paradise
by her first love.

Thank you

John

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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2007-03-08 12:07 PM

neat write and very interesting inspiration

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