Open Poetry #40 |
Space Age Daydream |
Madcap New Member
since 2007-03-03
Posts 6 |
Out on stage, and the lights are low Starting up pulsing steady and slow Glad you could turn up for the show! Now lay back to the frantic solo, yeah Oh! Freak-out to a timeless daydream, baby Take a trip to a cosmic space in time Keep your electric eyes on me, girl! Never thought I’d see so many people Smiling and waving and looking so fine Spinning round, electric lights moving very fast Through the beating hours of time! Oh! Freak-out on a space age daydream, baby Take a trip to a far-out place in time Just keep your electric eyes on me, girl! Winding down, the lights grow low Still buzzing from that space-cadet glow Floating inside a hazy cosmic tide Glad you could all take a ride! |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
This is interesting. I gathered it was likely written out of boredom? Seems most of mine were. I really gotta post more then I do. Anyway I enjoyed reading this. I thought of my Abigail while reading it. If a poem can trigger great memories or let the reader see an image then its good. |
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