Open Poetry #40 |
Twenty Steps More to the Darkened Door |
IntoTheRain Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 51Westwood, CA |
Caught between earth and sky Pinned empty to the wall Witness to the birth Sick, I want to rise For now back to broken ground The vacant static buzzing Sound of hollow voices They rise in chorus and Bind you in chains Reeling as her call Crumbles a pleading kiss Suddenly I realize That if I stepped out of my body I would break Into blossom Two months to the day A dead feeling And blank white snow Like an empty canvas |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rob~ 'Suddenly I realize That if I stepped out of my body I would break Into blossom' I felt the cimmerian thoughts~ I enjoyed this read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi "That if I stepped out of my body I would break Into blossom" Only a poet can do that. I've not said welcome yet, so welcome to Pip! |
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