Open Poetry #40 |
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No More Hospitals (forget Evelyn she can't see me anyways) |
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Madcap New Member
since 2007-03-03
Posts 6 |
Remember the lines from the white hallway. Very colourful they were; one was red firebrick, brique feu in French, and one olivedrab reminding me of very dirty vodka martinis with Chopin, straight up. I will follow them barefoot and go home. I’ll be happy. Treading around again, Evelyn is still smacking bruised hands to forehead trying to fling her demons against your wall. Forget about me Evelyn,your cackle can’t break this ice I'm bare foot for a reason, vacated Passing by the Frigid places amongst The plastic lime tiles Set above a sulpheric smell. Resounding stares - empty too - writhing past, another round down, Flat bottomed glass Inconceivable minds aligning in a row Pulsating rapidly against my vibe, a secret commune awash in a cocktail, Of colourful treats. |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
There are many vivid hues weaved through this piece. Interesting write. Oh! This is your first post. Welcome to Passions. I am sure you will see lots of great reads here you will enjoy and I look forward to more offerings of your work. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! With this kind of poetry, I am sure you will soon have a great audience of readers. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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