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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
My arduous journey forgoes to quiet nights, as I’ve been invited to float blissfully watching the moon show his face in lucid water. There, I’ve wailed a sorrows tale looking for natures handouts to resign the waltz that I had betrothed, and yet how can I recant the atlas that brought me here. For wasn’t the dance the compass that sketched my invitation? The quiet does not muzzle inspiration nor does it comfort a compromise. The night air is crisp and as the breeze blows a euphoric gesture, I'm indebted to the surreal. The grandiose pilgrimage has settled all regrets and lays floating where the crescent moon has smiled. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven~ Write the beauty of the moon and you hold me spellbound~ WELCOME to PiP~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"The night air is crisp and as the breeze blows a euphoric gesture, I'm indebted" The flow of this piece gave me a feeling of well-being, and the ending made me smile, too. Enjoyed. Welcome to Passions, I am sure you will see lots of great reads here you will enjoy. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same [This message has been edited by Janette (03-02-2007 08:28 PM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"There, I’ve wailed a sorrows tale looking for natures handouts to resign the waltz that I had betrothed" exceptional lines welcome Raven more please is my suggestion |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
am always drawn to a nice turn of a phrase and this one is exquisite "The grandiose pilgrimage has settled all regrets and lays floating where the crescent moon has smiled." welcome to PiP and definitely looking for more... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write welcome to PIP |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Thank you to all of you for your encouragement. I love nature. Its one of the gifts that give me inner rest. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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