»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #40
»
lantern lights
| Open Poetry #40 |
|
lantern lights |
|
|
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lantern lights teeter like tots on a totter softly swiveling in moonlit breezes ocean waves lapping the beach swirling in cascades of sand moon glistens as palm trees listen to the conch-like sounds of persistence gentle softness, gentle softness, gentle softness caressing, encircling, cycling ebbing the tide in tremors of suppleness bidding the sky to touch its hem curves and lines blending their hues in photo prints of kaleidoscope colors ...still waters... painted on canvasses of sand |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh my, how softly beautiful this is....this is lovely Steven, an excellent write from your pen sir. This touches the senses...wonderful..... seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
||
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I adore how YOU paint ... I want to go there right now, to this place you have so beautifully captured in this piece. Darnit! It is snowing here ... again. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...one of the most beautiful poems I have ever reverberated. What imagery to think in.  |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my indeed!! wonderful Steaven! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Nature surely seduces me. I felt like this poem amplified that. Well done. "still waters... painted on canvasses of sand" I could stare at that for hours. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
