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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2007-06-02 04:42 PM

   Lift the sigh
   of sad goodbye
   from a heart now torn
   blow me back
   to days not black
   before the dawn of next morn~

   I cannot right
   your write of wrong
   that cries me to the night
   you offer no deny
   of words in lie
   that leave me filled with fright~

   Do not turn
   to walk away
   please stop, look into my eyes
   stare me
   then spare me
   just go
   unspoken like before
   lest you would weave another lie~

   For,
   should you choose
   to continue the ruse,
   as you have done before
   speak not
   for your silence does not leave me
   wanting to hear more~



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-02-2007 06:39 PM).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2007-06-02 05:14 PM

Beautiful Marge!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-06-02 05:27 PM

The following is especially fine:

"just go
   unspoken like before
   lest you would weave another lie~

   For,
   should you choose
   to continue the ruse,
   as you have done before
   speak not
   for your silence does not leave me
   wanting to hear more~"

Applause!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2007-06-02 08:45 PM

gosh

this is kinda sad Marge

a bit out of your norm, and I do like it!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2007-06-02 08:45 PM

Incredibly and achingly beautiful, Marge.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-06-02 09:13 PM

SweetSue~
Thankee gal~

Bruce~
More than you know ... I thank YOU~

DixieDoodles~
It is isn't it ?
Found some gray ink that matched the weather of the day out~

Kacy~
I appreciate that~

*Huglets* of a BRIGHT SHADE OF PINK~
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-06-02 10:14 PM

My dear Marge,
a very very good one. I love to read your romantic poem. and this one with a bit sadness.

always a beauty

have a wonderful night, dear Marge!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-06-03 12:49 PM

Nice writing...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2007-06-05 08:39 AM

Silence speaks volumes, and you have marked the turning page here.
Well done dear Marge.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-06-05 10:22 AM

Margie, this was poignant, a magnificant write...thought provoking...and yes, silence is golden...

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

10 posted 2007-06-05 12:12 PM

Really good poem- so sad! Nice that it's long, too.

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