Open Poetry #40 |
Epopee |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost: Epopee I would to write an epopee To sooth our blights reality To touch the tender of each heart To wash away the anxious part I wish to hail humanity To sail a kite of sanity To make it wax in every part To salve those wounds that pox the heart Whispers seep above my head Burst about this living bed Fragile as a butterfly Mounted on a flowers lie I would for it to mix with air And be inhaled by all that’s there Intoxicate the passage goal And set a sign upon each soul To tide a light and brand in rhyme To ride a grain of sand in time |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeymourLovie~ You epopee in such a grand way *gifting* us with your poetic sway~ Love ya' poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your a breath of fresh air this morning, and as always, a smile in my heart My spirit will rise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My morning cup of seymour, and nope, I don't mind if it is reheated. Somehow you are always fresh. AND sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! "To touch the tender of each heart" ~ and this you do each and every day, m'dear sweet sonneteering friend! Your epopee poem spurred me to rework and repost my own epopee, The Suns Are Rising. Have a glorious day! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a dear my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You are the warmth of a sunny day. Serenity, Thank you sweetheart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And the angels sing. You are a love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
B E A U T I F U L !! AND you were missed! & , Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I kept wanting to say, me too...but I think you have done it first. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
"To ride a grain of sand in time" as sand and time, in rhyme are mine.... Sey, you make your wishes everybodies to share... Ivor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, So glad you are better. Martie, You always say the right thing. Ivor, I was away but glad to be back, thank you. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
all good--as usual--but especially liked 'I wish to hail humanity To sail a kite of sanity To make it wax in every part To salve those wounds that pox the heart' and how we all need that salve... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I would for it to mix with air And be inhaled by all that’s there Intoxicate the passage goal And set a sign upon each soul" just sitting here breathing it in Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Thank you for the read and reply. Lady, Always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... just lovely!!! RDB did you have a nice vacation? We missed you!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB Yes but now I need a vacation to recoup. Thank you |
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