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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am a marginal presence in my entries, journalized the gaps between the dates explain the little bit that I describe and there are pages I have torn ragged edges leaving proof that what you read is truth indeed, but edited maniacally as if my life were just a trick of cards maneuvered clumsily laughing much too nervously "Pretend that you did not see this" as aces peek there from my sleeve winking at you, even now I am a presence, marginal math done on the back of page sequences of slants like this //// and stick men with their fingers wage concepts of simplicity before I draw them with bare feet counting on their toes. Ragged edges of me curled in the journal of forget as I wrap my hair in twirl around a finger of regret accusing me of negligence: "Pretend that you did not see this" written on page three. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are so much more than marginal dear lady |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"and stick men with their fingers wage concepts of simplicity before I draw them with bare feet counting on their toes." Your journaling is most profound, as I "maneuvered" through it I counted so many things that captured my imagination. Fascinating, and I am glad I did SEE it. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I tried to "Pretend that you did not see this" ... but I'm peeking at pages and seeing thoughts that intrigue me~ Back at the top with ya'  *Huglets*  ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity I cannot pretend for you are so clear.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
No one could ever pretend they have not seen what you have written. Because you write magic! Love ya lady~ In the midst of winter, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what an excellent write! I found myself pouring over it again and again...just loved the lines "Ragged edges of me curled in the journal of forget as I wrap my hair in twirl around a finger of regret accusing me of negligence:" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and yet it is the marginal presence sequences of slants //// that intrigues so sigh |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
As you guys can see? I am a really bad journal keeper. I think these blue pages constitue the closest thing to memoirs of any sort that I have kept. And yeah, I break all the rules--I write autobiographically (but just enough to keep folks confused) I don't mind using the pronound "I", 'cause I figure ya'll are bright enough to know that since I wrote it, "I" was there, and I use slant rhymes, convenient rhymes, I jump in and outta meter, and generally just try to have my own way with m'self.  So...*curtsey* I thank you all kindly, and Janette? You may be the only one who read pages one and two. Thanks again kind poet folk. and a special thank you for marge, too, who is anything but "marginal" herself.  Love to all. |
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