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A Shoulder to lean on
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A Shoulder to lean on |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Feeling Blue.... I have a terrible ache inside... how do I stop that feeling from taking over ... How do I stop my darkness from taking advantage of my blue state of mind.... So many things to handle! Sometimes I need a shoulder to cry on.. but do I have one near me? Not really... Everyone seems to be so far away... some in their own world... in their own darkness.. I have only but myself.. Sometimes I need a shoulder to cry on, but do I have one? I don't know sometimes... when I think and feel I do... I reach out and find a void.... I just need to be held for a moment... so that I could collect myslef and think straight... and not feel so alone.... Though I am a loner by nature, loneliness shouldn't bother me... but it does when I am feeling blue.... I hope I still have a shoulder to cry on even though a void I felt when I reached out today... I can sense its presence that hides within its darkness.. must I cross the distance to find my comfort? Or will it reach out and meet me half way.... Sometimes i need a shoulder to cry on, are you really there? 10/17/06 Jen [This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (01-12-2007 12:30 PM).] |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Very nice start,Good Job! No need to sugarcoat certain things...You can have one of mine; if you still need "A shoulder to lean on" Looking forward to reading more of your work |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and my shoulder always has 'available' on it too  nicely penned my sweet friendRDB |
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