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Open Poetry #40

Poetry Meeting, (after Daivid Ignatow)

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-01-10 09:43 PM

.

At the meeting,
no longer listening,

all I want . . .
is the woman in front,

now. . .
while her hair
is actually black

and mine
is brown.

.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-10 11:04 PM

oh John you have such a way with words, I love it!! RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-01-11 06:19 AM

now is really all we have anyway

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2007-01-11 10:26 AM

It must be something in the air this morning...

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-01-11 07:44 PM

Thank you all,

An old still young poem.
It makes me think I have to get out
more often for anything good
to result. Currently too much
the complacent hermit

Thanks again

John

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