Open Poetry #40 |
Shimmers of Silver |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Forlorn skeletal trees Spinsters in a line Looking for perfection Arms reaching Their whispers plaintively begging For green linen dresses To wrap bared bark In shimmers of silver Rooted toes tapping lightly Against frozen ground As dark eyes peer hopefully Dreaming of the sun Yearning to dance again aziza [This message has been edited by aziza (02-27-2007 03:03 AM).] |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
Seemed very surreal. Felt like I was on another planet. Try writing some short fantasy stories. I'd like to see what you come up with. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for reading and enjoying. A |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
The trees do look sad right now, this made me long to see them "dance" again, soon. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I love your naked spinster trees aziza |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent imagery...your canvass painted your picture perfectly |
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