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when first I missed you at gut level (the michael poems)
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when first I missed you at gut level (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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solitary lunch at osteria del pescatoria fisherman's little restaurant slow rain playing mussels with black furry beards bread dipped in butter wine sauce tastes like your fingers right there next to the nail wandering sipping easy jesus brandy our lady of the parking lot simpering in oil spill water her judgment face following me I tell my rosary to the memory of your hands genuflect list my pain my simple sin I love the way those 501’s don’t fit your skinniness the way those buttons don’t make any sound oh lady forgive me listen to the way the rain air breathes me rattling slicing through my desire my unholy godless need dear lady bless my plastic tumbler my easy jesus brandy and tell me didn’t you ever feel the miss of a face on a skinny man in 501’s |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
woman...you CAN write !!! i take each word and hold them close to my skin you just wow me |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You weave magic with your word stories. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wow thank you Helen! thank you so much aziza... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Much feeling here Kate. Images make them all the more strong. Excellent write, Milady. MoonShadow . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all the Levi's 501s that I've seen on men have fit very nicely LOL and yeah, the buttons don't make a sound, do they? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You already know what I know...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!...just WOW!! In the midst of winter, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
absolutely beautiful I haven't been reading much of you, I blush to admit, but now I must go read the michael poems... what an incredible rosary, you!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this one...you need to read slowly...it is truly a verbal write...I especially love how 'osteria del pescatoria' flows off the lips...excellent write |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you gentle sir MoonShadow ahhh Dixie doesn’t matter how they fit a man in 501’s is an awesome thing and those buttons are very quiet… Karilea I do know what you know and I appreciate you always! thanks for the WOW’s Nancy I needed them Karen thank you for reading and for your words steaven I love those words too thank you |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my!! you are way too good girlfriend!! love this write of yours  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece m'friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Unique and an absolutely exciting to read. Clap clap clap ... Bravo! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for the bravo Janette! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
501's mmm hmmm...yes ma'am...  Another wonder from your pen Lady Kate. Hugs you... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh gentle Donna I knew you could relate to 501's big hugs to you |
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