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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
should the lily leave the field or the sand separate from the shore? should the sparkle depart from twilight or shining disappear from beams of moon? yet, i find myself alone and though we speak with words electric i find myself alone, as though that seclusion were an asset and the sweet sorrow of parting could be understood, though we find ourselves unknown, distracted, desolate—we never even meet to share, to care, to cherish life’s moments in its time that happens to all who truly live it altogether together |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Certainty and security, as time blows it's winds upon our lives. Sometimes, it carries the sand, and sometimes reroots the lily... When it's right, they find themselves altogether together. A process of gliding  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ah TD, as grasshoppa sits before the master with legs crossed and head bowed in reverence, he ponders the wind as a gust slaps him in the face bringing with it a lily covered in sand...and he is struck with the essence of the master's wisdom... thank you for reading and commenting... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"i find myself alone, as though that seclusion were an asset" Wow ... "asset." This thought provoking piece made me think ... Gee, I hope I always choose to "live it altogether together." Powerful write here! Enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only was I captivated by the images and concept of your profound and poetic piece of writing, I also appreciated the beauty and wisdom of the replies that it received ~ as well as the response that you wrote.  Loving Light, Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I find myself alone a lot I think somehow it makes me cherish the time that I do have company loved this write! |
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