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Sweet Slip Sliver
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Sweet Slip Sliver |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sweet Slip Sliver ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Sweet slip sliver serendipitous small shimmer silently sashaying-softly swaying tiptoeing toward tumultuous twi-dawn crisp cumulus clusters cloistering cloak beauteous balustrade breaking beneath undulating under-currents undermining duty - determined dawn doth dawn Luna loveliness lastingly lingers small slip sliver shimmers serendipitously~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I do love how you do these!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge~How lovely this is! But not as lovely as you m'friend.  In the midst of winter, |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
You are incredible! love, Barb |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I just love it Betty |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marvelous....I can even hear the silver twinkling through! *hugs*...jo |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Looks just like last night's sliver moon. Your wording is breathtaking. Rae |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am sure if the members knew how much time it took to compose a composition such as this, the accolades would be, in a word, from here to the moon! They are fun, and a great work of art, in and of itself. And yes, I see "her" in "him" too... as it should be. Well done, Marge. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Marge I get lost in the magical web you weave. You always make me smile. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
accolades to the moon as Sunshine says... incredible work |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
these phrases slip so easily from your pen. Love, Joyce |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I saw this last night when someone whispered, "Look, God's fingernail"...and the beauty I studied the night before is here before us again...lovely concrete... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Just incredible!You are a true artist of the pen! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Marge, this is so beautiful. I love the way you do these. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dear Margie accolades to me would be incredibly difficult and last night's moon was as miraculously such... you are a dearheart well done and fun to read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge makes millions mentioning meaning locked lovely lucious love language |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ There is always something magical in the rays of the moon .... they fall around me, splashing in my ink-of-think, aressing my thoughts ... I am of the Luna~ The phases of her beauty simply allow me to word-adorn her to share with you all~ Thank you ALL for such appreciation~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
well words finally came to me in the night, and i got to come and see what i have been missing. your beautiful words. My spirit will rise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You do love painting poetry such as this. Congratulations on your book, proud of ya. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is just wonderful.Itbis beauty for eyes, for ears, for tongue and for entertaining the spirit. simply wonderful. a true artist. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I do love this one...Sooo very beautiful...*Big Hugs* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again you offer us a reflection of your intimate relationship with the moon in such a delightful way. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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