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A Heart Can Forget To Dance
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A Heart Can Forget To Dance |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Heart Can Forget To Dance put your arms around me just this, this is my plea I want to feel a tender touch forgotten the needs of such can you help me find my feet teach me the steps so sweet a heart can forget to dance but not the desire of romance loneliness in nights and days memories music slowly plays painfully it should not be this way give up, give in or forget, no never I believe, this is my true endeavor of this dream, just one of some that the best is yet to come I want to dance not stand still it is not enough to what I feel so put your arms around me just this, this is my plea “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautifulwho could resist? |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
and it is all about the dance in matters of the heart isn't it? I always like reading your poetry take care!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
another good write H. enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Helen! Hugs, Ethel |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Helen, Always the unrepentant romantic. I’m frankly surprised you’re still alive . . . John . |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Definitely true! Nice write, Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
enjoyed as I do with all you write. martyjo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Touch is very important! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want to feel a tender touch forgotten the needs of such can you help me find my feet teach me the steps so sweet a heart can forget to dance but not the desire of romance What beauty you've written here! And you're right... a heart can forget to dance and a face can forget to smile... often needing help to remember. *S* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting, thoughtful, emotive 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "...help me find my feet teach me the steps so sweet a heart can forget to dance but not the desire of romance" Applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I want to dance not stand still" yes! never give up the dance Helen |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a beautiful poem! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kick the shoes off babe, got the slow songs on, wear me music...enjoyed you here |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful flow and sentiments, Helen ... indeed, this is so very true. Nicely penned. Best wishes, /Kit |
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