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Swimming with Sea Turtles - (IV)
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Swimming with Sea Turtles - (IV) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Swimming with Sea Turtles You warmed me with the pictures in your mind A vision created with the paint brush of your words And I felt the sun kiss my sandy skin and I remembered the nibble of the Sea Turtles I swam in the cove, even though I can't swim Did I tell you that? Freckles brushed the bridge of my nose White sands dusted me as I dozed And, I remembered that which I have never known ... aziza |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
"And, I remembered that which I have never known" This line alone warms a poet's heart. If words can create channels to the avenues of the mind we seldom explore and beyond, then the pen is truly mightier than the sword. Your poetry reminded me of a diving boat I was on in Turkey stopping to see one of these magnificent creatures. Just the sight of them brings feelings of memories lost somewhere in time... Ivor |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ivor Your reply is a gift in itself. Thank you. Alison |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this one touches the senses, it is magnificantly written, please pen on |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poetry is magical. I not only read your descriptive imagery, I see and feel them! "And, I remembered that which I have never known" ~ This line holds an extra-special meaning for me.   EA |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
It' sthe knowing without knowing....that is the blissfulness of secrets between lovers isn't it???!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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