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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State 
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Autumn is awesome in early fall, With pretty colors over all. Utterly confused by weather changing, The leaf color is always rearranging. This day warm, the next one cold, The wind is soft or else it's bold. Soon it will be much closer to winter, And very soon Jack Frost will enter. Most of the days grow frigid then. The bear is nestled in his den. Now Autumn packs her vivid hues, Leaving only white for Winter's use. By: Joyce Johnson |
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kevinjtaylor Member Posts 61 British Columbia, Canada |
Very nicely done, Joyce. I particularly like the turn at the end of white for winter's use. |
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Clare Ite Member Posts 66 Where The Pallet Pins Play |
Splendid, dear Joyce. I was happy to read you again. I always have time for you... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great write once again. It was a delight treat for the thoughts within my brain.  I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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johnthecat Junior Member Posts 18 England |
Beautifully evocative. Thank you. |
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johnthecat Junior Member Posts 18 England |
I think this is beautifully evocative. I can almost feel that cold breeze in the sunshine. Thank you, Joyce. |
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