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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2014-07-04 04:11 PM



I spent the summer,
Watching from my window,
As you crushed a flower
For the sake of silky pleasure.

I spent my summer by the river,
Searching for my reflection,
Instead only finding,
That memories flow down hill.

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2014-07-27 05:37 AM


Lovely touch of melancholy.

Joy and peace.
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2014-08-10 07:14 PM


Which means they also have rapids and falls - painful sections that can bite!

Good piece, my friend.

j.

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