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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
Autumn Evening a sittin on the back porch watchin sun go over hill pair o' deer stroll by the creek. me mrs and i sharing quiet relaxed, warm autumn eve wiener dog guarding, vigilant. nearly forty years in making this evening of hometown still who says one can't go home? holding hand in hand again a glance and secret smile this God given love of mine. one of those precious times when everything is good memories made of todays. a sittin on the back porch watchin sun go over hill our lil world a goin to sleep. ~~~  |
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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
hmmm...seems this one wasn't liked? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so absolutely serene. I love it. You are right it surely deserves a second round. If you wish to have more readers you might want to try the Open Forum and of course the more you interact by commenting also on other writers' poems, the more attention your works will get. Margherita  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've painted a lovely serene picture, Daniel! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've painted a lovely serene picture, Daniel! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And I'll third what Denise said, Daniel.  Alison |
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Daniel James Burt Junior Member
since 2011-05-15
Posts 45ID |
ty...tyvm! |
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