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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2012-06-27 12:02 PM



    Fall Lover

My springtime love was much too young.
He came before his flings were flung.

Beguiled by beauty in the spring.
His fickle love was passing thing.

A summer love was more mature
But much too hot to long endure.

The heat of summer soon will pass
And then I’ll be a lonely lass.

In fall I have a cooler head
To search for one to warm my bed.

True love survives the winter’s blast
And through the winter’s cold will last.
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By: Joyce Johnson 9/25/11


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Margherita
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1 posted 2012-06-30 05:34 AM


How lovely, dear Joyce, and so true.

I much enjoyed the poetic rendering of your philosophy here!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2012-07-01 06:58 PM


Hi Joyce:

I thought this was a cute poem.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2012-07-01 08:09 PM


Thanks to you Margherita for your kind words.  Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2012-07-01 08:24 PM


Thanks Betty Loou.  I hope you have been okay.  Love, Joyce
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5 posted 2012-07-06 12:38 PM


Joyce, I've been away from Pub 3 for some time...good to be back...see some old names I recognize as well as some new ones.

Your poem, "Fall Lover", was delightful. You have added some intriging depth to your poetry since I was last here.

Though I have always enjoyed your presentations, this on was extremely alluring to an old fisherman like me!

Please, continue the good heartfelt work.


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6 posted 2012-07-09 12:47 PM


Joyce,

I enjoyed this poem and could have sworn that I wrote that days ago.  Guess I only thought it.  

xoxoxo
Alison

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7 posted 2012-07-12 07:41 PM


I enjoyed your rendering of love through the different seasons. Very nice. -Bob
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