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Verbena
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since 2005-10-17
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0 posted 2011-02-13 09:44 AM


This is an acrostic poem I wrote for Valentine's Day, 2010.

Verily I say to thee
A love as true as thine,
Lights the way for ye
Each year on Valentine.

Nights befall; days arise
To tender thoughts in mind.
Inner feelings in disguise
Now surface as ye'll find;

Each year on Valentine.

By Elizabeth Singh



© Copyright 2011 Elizabeth Singh - All Rights Reserved
Anoo
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since 2011-01-23
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1 posted 2011-02-13 12:47 PM


Very well written, shows a note of classical poetry.
Enjoyed the acrostic poem.
Anoo

Verbena
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since 2005-10-17
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2 posted 2011-02-14 02:59 AM


Thank you Anoo for your lovely comment about my poem.

Verbena


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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2011-02-15 05:56 PM


Dear Verbena:

Very well done. I enjoyed reading it.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Verbena
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since 2005-10-17
Posts 196
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4 posted 2011-02-16 06:44 AM


Dear Betty Lou

I thought it was about time that I posted my acrostic poem here in PiP seeings as I did not get around to it last year on Valentine's Day.  I'm so glad you enjoyed my  poem.

Love Verbena xo


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