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PurplePenButterfly
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since 2008-03-06
Posts 65
Canada

0 posted 2010-08-06 11:38 AM



" Just Smile With God "

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Through your sunshine or rain
Even in the darkest hours
In anger and pain

When you're lonely or with a friend
Family , church folk
Someone you can rely and depend

When the storms hit
And you're feeling low
In turmoil and with obstacles
You search to find the way
Because you must know

Take a moment
In silence or with a pen
When you're done
Conclude with " Amen"

No matter in life
Young or old
Follow your spirit truly
Let it all unfold

Angels and the Lord are with you
Where you may trod
Just simply
Give praise
Blessed be
Just Smile With God...

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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 115
West Coast, USA
1 posted 2010-08-06 09:24 PM


I like the easy flow of this poem, and the straightforward message. Thought provoking, yet with a well done simplicity. Thanks.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-08-07 10:17 PM


This poem does flow well, and it's good advice, too!
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