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Tree Sparrow (Haiqua)

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-03-07 12:49 PM

Found another
tree;

Other love
now;

All trees
sound;

Tree songs
loud;

A love
song;

Sings - it stays.

*6 lines- 3 syllables each (haiqua)
http://poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2010-04-27 01:12 AM

This is very nice. Pretty piece. Joyce

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-05-23 12:50 PM

A birdish bardly soliloquy of threes! Very nice.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-06-07 08:07 AM

How lovely, dear Laverne. Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

4 posted 2010-11-29 08:23 PM

Each word is very impactful.. wonderful read.

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