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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Dry tears fall upon wet stone, She turned only half way but still was alone. Searching the horizon for an invisible star, What delights would he enjoy on his journey a far? I said to her, 'My shoes envy you fro your feet,' Dainty, slender and light but still She refused to eat from the day when he went away. 'I must be a beauty.' And I had nothing to say. Pictured in hot climes with cinnamon concubines. Will in the back of his mind, Be what he has left behind? 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Oh lord the spelling and spacing errors XD 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
with cinnamon concubines interesting line but you use it vaguely |
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